Saturday, April 29, 2017

Wikipedia Trail from Ravana to Homer

The links are in the corresponding image links. Pictures were taken from the Wikipedia page.

Ravana Statue. Source

I chose Ravana initially because he was the antagonist in the Ramayana and I loved that story. He was a super interesting character with his 10 heads and multiple hands. I also found it interesting how his ancestors were part of the trinity.

Mythology of Different Cultures. Source

I then went to mythology because the other class that Dr. Gibbs teaches is mythology. This is one class that I wish I would have taken. Mythology is so interesting to me.

Scripture from Parthenon - 440BC. Source

I then went to Ancient Greek because I think it would be fun to visit Greece. I have heard stories that the people are very friendly and the culture is so interesting. Also Greek mythology is great to read and learn about.

Homer. Source

I then went to Homer because he is one of the people that are well known in the western societies in terms of epics. He wrote the Iliad and The Odyssey, which two of my favorite epics of all time.


Wikipedia Trail from Rama to General Relativity

The links are in the corresponding image links. Pictures were taken from the Wikipedia page.

Rama. Source

I originally did Rama because the Ramayana was my favorite epic from the class. Rama was such a dynamic character. I love how he was Vishnu in human form.

Cosmology. Source

I went to cosmology next because I am an aerospace engineer. I love cosmology and anything related to space. The study of the subject itself is awesome.

Dark Energy Expansion. Source

I next went to dark energy because I learned a little bit about it in my astrodyamics class last semester. I still do not completely understand the concepts but it is an interesting aspect in the expansion of the universe. 

General Relativity. Source

I ended with general relativity because this was also an interesting topic in my astroynamics class. The theory itself is interesting and very dense. If interested, there are great YouTube videos to explain the theory.


Friday, April 28, 2017

Future Planning: Course Improvements

Change Review Weeks to Planning Weeks:
I believe that this would definitely be a big change to the class but I did not really follow my own schedule either. I did assignments when they were convenient (either days before or the morning of). I had kind of a crazy last semester in terms of time because I also had my capstone going on while trying to make relocation plans for after school and all that. So I definitely think that changing to planning weeks would be helpful for some but maybe not all.

Expand the Story Planning Option:
I used the story planning option and I loved it. Not only did it give me a chance to think about what I could write, a lot of the stories at the start went through 2 weeks. Therefore, it was nice being able to do all 4 reading notes before doing a story in case you were relating it to the story.

Create more audio recordings:
The audio recordings were excellent! The Indian Epics class had a lot of names that I would normally be unsure of how to pronounce but the audio recordings really helped with that! Also it is nice to have a story told to you at times!

Create writing tutorial videos:
I have a lot of writing errors in terms of grammar but I am unsure on how much I would actually watch the videos. Usually if I have a question about grammar or writing I just Google it.

Create thematic reading units:
I think these thematic stories would be great because I found myself often going back to similar styles that I have already read. If there are different themes then it could make the class have a broader perspective!

Tech Tip: Blog Profile

I removed my name from the blog post but not because I am trying to be secretive or embarrassed about my work. I personally just prefer my names not to be on things if it is not necessary on the internet. I feel like I have setup a decent online identity for myself for when I graduate. The only social media that I really use is LinkedIn and it looks professional. In the years to come I think it is just important for me to retain a professional identity and not to post unnecessary things, at least under my name.

Tuesday, April 25, 2017

Reading Notes: Peter Brook - Mahabharata Online Film, Part B

Gambling Match. Source


Peter Brook - Mahabharata, link to online film.

  • Part B starts at the 53 minute mark and goes until the 1 hour and 38 minute mark
  • Vishnu takes on human form and descends to play his role (some thought that he came down as Krishna)
  • The Ganesha mask is removed from the character and it is Krishna
  • Krishna is met by the Pandavas and Draupadi
  • Krishna believes that Yudhishthira is the right choice for king
  • Duryodhana gives the Pandavas part of the kingdom
  • There is a war now and Duhshasana and Karna give advice on how to beat the Pandavas
  • Bhishna will be loyal to Dhritarashtra and his sons in the war
  • Gandhari's brother, Shakuni, arrives
  • Duryodhana was telling Shakuni of his jealousy and anger towards the Pandavas
  • Shakuni wants to play a game of dice and will win for Duryodhana
  • Shakuni gets into a gambling match
  • Shakuni is a known cheater and wins every roll
  • Yudhishthira gambles all of his possessions
  • Shakuni won everything from Yudhishthira after he gambled his brothers, he even staked himself
  • Bhima vows to kill Duhshasana and drink his blood
  • Draupadi vows that she will wash her hair in Duhshasana's blood and that Duryodhana will die from a blow to the thigh
  • "This will be a terrible war" - Duryodhana to his father

Reading Notes: Peter Brook - Mahabharata Online Film, Part A

The Gods applauded Bhishma's act. Source


Peter Brook - Mahabharata, link to online film.

  • Part A goes until the 53 minute mark
  • A boy is wandering through a temple
  • The boy sees Vyasa meditating
  • Vyasa gives a poem 
  • Ganesha is a scribe
  • The birth of Satyavati is told by Vyasa
  • Bhishma cannot become king
  • Bhishma's son, Satyavati, will never be able to love a woman but in return, he can choose the time of his death
  • Pandu becomes the king
  • Pandu marries Kunti
  • Pandu also marries Madri
  • Dhritarashtra became the king as well
  • Pandu wants children but cannot make love to his wife
  • Kunti is caring to a sage and he grants her the gift of a Mantra
  • Kunti's mantra can summon gods and when they leave, a baby is left with her
  • Drona tests the archery skills
  • Arjuna is a skilled archer that can focus well on the target
  • Drona teaches Arjuna his archery skills, but if they ever come face to face then Ajruna must fight Drona and kill him

Tuesday, April 18, 2017

Reading Notes: Sita Sings the Blues Online Film, Part B


Sita Sings the Blues, link to the online video

  • Sita tells Rama she is pregnant. Meanwhile, a laundry man (a dhobi) beats his wife, accusing her of being unfaithful and comparing her to Sita
  • To protect his reputation, Rama tells his brother Lakshmana to take Sita into the forest and abandon her. The narrators debate these events
  • Sita, now very pregnant, sings the blues again. Lakshmana, weeping, takes her into the forest and abandons her
  • Sita thinks it is karma from a past life that is bringing her grief. She would kill herself if she were not pregnant. Valmiki rescues her
  • Sita sings the blues on the shore of the river
  • She gives birth to twins, Lava and Kusha. From Valmiki, they learn to sing the praises of Rama
  • Sita sings the blues again, looking at Rama's picture
  • Rama hears the boys singing in the forest. He learns they are his sons, and they learn Rama is his father. He asks that Sita once again prove her purity
  • Sita calls upon Mother Earth to prove her purity and take her back into the womb
  • Sita sings about her love for Rama one last time, and then leaves them behind
  • You see Chandra the moon god, Vishnu rubbing Lakshmi's feet

Reading Notes: Sita Sings the Blues Online Film, Part A


Sita Sings the Blues, link to the online video
  • King Dasharatha has three wives and four sons. Sita, daughter of Janaka, is Rama's wife. Queen Kaikeyi makes Dasharatha send Rama into exile. He dies of grief after Rama leaves
  • Despite Rama's warnings about the rakshasas in the forest, Sita goes into exile with him. The phonograph plays a song while they go into the forest where they live happily while Rama slays rakshasas
  • Surpanakha is Ravana's sister. Angry at Rama, Surpanakha tells Ravana about Sita. Maricha tells Ravana to leave Sita alone but Ravana commands Maricha to become a golden deer to distract Rama so he can grab Sita
  • Sita is enchanted by the golden deer. Rama suspects a trick, but Sita begs him to pursue the deer
  • Sita sings about her love for Rama, while Ravana sneaks up on their forest hut
  • Ravana abducts Sita in his flying chariot
  • Sita drops her jewelry as a sign; Rama seeks her in the forest
  • Rama and Hanuman become allies. Rama sends Hanuman to look for Sita
  • Sita is held captive in Lanka, and she weeps for Rama. She rejects Ravana's advances
  • Hanuman finds Sita in Lanka while Sita sings the blues. He sets Lanka on fire and then returns to Rama
  • The narrators argue about why Sita did not escape with Hanuman. Meanwhile, Nina goes to India
  • Sita sings with joy while Rama battles the rakshasas and slays Ravana
  • Sita and Rama are reunited, but he rejects her because she lived in another man's house. He sends her away. Sita despairs
  • Sita asks for a funeral pyre. The narrators argue about how to interpret this part of the story
  • Sita sings the blues while she undergoes a test by fire, protected by Agni the fire god
  • Rama asks for Sita's forgiveness
  • The narrators discuss the flying chariot, Pushpaka, that takes Rama and Sita back to Ayodhya
  • Sita sings the blues again: if you want the rainbow, you must have the rain

Wednesday, April 12, 2017

Reading Notes: Krishna Online Film, Part B


Krishna Online Films, link to the online videos


  • Brahma tested Krishna's drivine power and all that he sees around him is Krishna
  • Krishna was able to tame the wild Hastin (extremely hard for a normal person to do)
  • Gargacharya reveals to Krishna the truth of his birth and that is why he could not marry Radha
  • Akrur arrived in Vrindavan
  • Akrur invited Krishna to Mathura
  • Krisnha's farewll left Vrindavan in despair
  • Krishna lived in Gokul and Nand Guan
  • Krishna's fame spreads in Mathura
  • People witness Krishna's deeds, one is a woman called Trivakra
  • Kansa makes his last attempt to kill Krishna
  • Kansa tries to use an elephant to kill Krishna
  • Kansa learns that the 8th son of Devaki appeared and therefore knew that he would die soon
  • Breaking the bow -> killing of Kuvalayapida -> killing of wrestlers -> killing of Kansa
  • Krishna frees Mathura after killing Kansa
  • Mathura fell prey to enemy attacks

Tuesday, April 11, 2017

Reading Notes: Krishna Online Film, Part A


Krishna Online Films, link to the online videos


  • Krishna is a very significant character in the Mahabharata
  • Krishna would lead the Pandava's into war
  • Vasudev is Krishna's father
  • Vasudev meets Yamuna
  • Durga and Kansa speak with one another
  • (Don't really understand what happened in episode 3 too much)
  • Yashoda finds a woman named Putana that wants to help her
  • Krishna was still in danger
  • Krishna was becoming very famous and well-known
  • Yashoda looked inside of Krishna's mouth and thought there would be mud in there
  • Episode 6 really shows that Krishna is unique and not just a regular child and Yashoda learns this
  • Krishna moves from Gokul to Vrindavan
  • Kalia the naag is poisoning the lake's water
  • The Kansa demon army was growing (but so was Krishna)
  • Indra had a wrath on Vrindavan because Krishna's people chose to pay their respects to Govardhan Hill
  • Radha had an eternal and unconditional love for Krishna

Wednesday, April 5, 2017

Reading Notes: The Indian Story Book, Part B



The Indian Story Book, retold by Richard Wilson, link to the online reading


  • Ravana was told that his foes would take a pathway through the "trackless sea"
  • He saw the army coming closer and closer to shore but they were silent
  • Ravana then went to the grove where Sita was kept a prisoner
  • He told Sita that Rama was dead
  • Ravana told his warriors to go get the head of Rama
  • Sita then found out that Rama was not dead
  • Kumbhakarana was Ravana's younger brother
  • This brother was a giant that slept for a long time and went into a hibernation type state, when he awakes, he feeds on people
  • Rama wins the battle
  • Sita learned that Rama was victorious
  • Rama and Sita then saw each other
  • At the end of the story, the fourteen years of exile were accomplished
  • Rama and Sita were welcomed backed into the kingdom

Tuesday, April 4, 2017

Reading Notes: The Indian Story Book, Part A


Intro to the Story Book. Source


The Indian Story Book, retold by Richard Wilson, link to the online reading


  • The city of Ayodhya seemed like a happy place, plenty of food and water, sweet music, workmen rejoicing in their skills
  • King Dasaratha did not have a son to succeed him
  • To get a son, Dasaratha would have to do a horse sacrifice
  • There were 4 sons born to King Dasaratha
  • "Bears and monkeys useful to him in work" said a holy man
  • King Mithila had a lovely daughter named Sita
  • Arrangements were made between Rama and Sita to be married
  • Dasartha eventually started to grow old and wanted to hand the kingdom over to Rama
  • Rama went into voluntary exile
  • Rama came to the borders of the great forest through which the sacred Ganges flows, this is where the chariot left him and returned to the kingdom
  • Bharata, the king's other son, was put on the throne with the passing of his father
  • Bharata wanted Rama to be the king
  • Rama could not return, but he let Bharata take his sandles back to Ayodhya
  • Rama went alone into the forest with his bow and was met with a great shower of arrows, rocks, trees, clubs, darts. and loops of rope
  • Luckily, Rama was skilled with the bow, Rama came out victorious
  • The Rakshahsa transformed a demon, Maricha, into a beautiful golden deer with silver and horns sets of jewels
  • Sita was so fascinated by the deer that she told Rama to go capture it
  • The monkey king is called Sugriva
  • Sugriva's immediate attendants were Nala, Nila, Tara, and Hanuman, Son of the Wind
  • Hanuman went to go and comfort Sita for Rama

Wednesday, March 29, 2017

Week 10 Story Planning: Wonder Woman Hindi Sequel

Wonder Woman. Source

I am planning to continue my story between Rama and Wonder Woman for my Week 11 story. My first story had a portal that brought Rama into Wonder Woman’s world and my last story was a prequel that explained why Wonder Woman was connected to the Indian epics. For this story, I want to make it where Wonder Woman starts to maybe find out some of her roots and connections. She was sent to this dimension by herself when she was born so technically she is completely unaware of the whole thing. Her mother is Kunti and the goddess Durga. In my prequel, I had it where Kunti died but I do not want that to be the case and will go back and rewrite that for my project revisions this week. I am thinking about somehow sending Durga to find Wonder Woman and try to get some of the story between the two straightened out. I want to have a fight scene or battle that involves Durga and Wonder Woman against some enemies but I am not really sure who that enemy is going to be yet. I will probably have one more story following this story so I am planning to add some kind of cliffhanger as well to lead into the final story that I write.

Ideas:
  • Durga and Wonder Woman fighting some evil forces
  • Wonder Woman learning about her past after her and Durga battle together
  • Wonder Woman will be of some type of importance to the Indian Epics due to her connection with Durga
  • The Indian characters may want her to return with them to the dimension
  • I want Wonder Woman to stay in her dimension so that maybe in the next story she can be sent into the dimension with Durga and she will be the one to have her cultural shock
  • Maybe add a love story for Wonder Woman and Rama from the first story that I wrote?


Pikapost. link to the website.
Mahabharata Online Films, link to the online videos

Tuesday, March 28, 2017

Reading Notes: Mahabharata Online Film, Part F

Bheem and Hanuman. Source


Mahabharata Online Films, link to the online videos


  • Draupadi gets disrobed
  • Draupadi had an oath to only tie her hair once she washed it with the blood and combed it with the bones of her enemies
  • Pandavas get sent into exile
  • (Pandavas do not seem very smart, in my opinion)
  • Seems like the Pandavas do not really ever learn their lesson
  • The exile for the Pandavas begins
  • Krishna could not help the Pandavas when they needed him
  • Krishna met with the Pandavas
  • (Krishna seems to never really let anything bother him)
  • The Pandavas needed to get support from the gods to fight the war
  • Arjun entered heaven in a human form
  • Arjun was able to enter heaven in this human form because Krishna used him as a tool to re-establish dharma
  • Arjun received Shiva's weapon when he was brought up to Indralok
  • Arjun was blessed and received proper training for the upcoming battle
  • Arjun was cursed by Urvashi while he was staying at Indralok
  • Bheem encounters Hanuman

Monday, March 27, 2017

Reading Notes: Mahabharata Online Film, Part E

Draupadi. Source


Mahabharata Online Films, link to the online videos


  • Subhadra wins over Draupadi
  • Abhimanya was born
  • Abhimanya is the nephew of Lord Krishna
  • Abhimanya married Uttara, the princess of Matsya Kingdom
  • Abhimanya was the reincarnation of the moon-god, Chandra
  •  Abhimanya was trained by Krishna
  • Pradyumna was Krishna and Rukmini's son
  • Jarasandha was slain
  • Krishna seemed impatient with the punishment of Shishupal
  • Yudhishthir becomes king
  • (Could not really concentrate on episode 40 with all of the background noise)
  • "Duryodhan's Humiliation"
  • Shakuni was Prince of Gandhar
  • Shakuni appears middle-eastern
  • Yudhishthir and the Kauravas gamble (Ludo).
  • Kauravas were losing the first rounds while Yudhishthir was winning the first ones
  • Yudhishthir got overconfident with winning and eventually it did not turn out well
  • Yudhishthir gambled his brothers and wife and ended up losing them
  • Draupadi was at stake (used her as image for these reading notes)

Sunday, March 26, 2017

Ryan McElyea's Portfolio

3/23/17
Week 9 Story: The Link
This story is the prequel to The Meeting. It explains "The Link" between Wonder Woman and the Indian Epics.

2/27/17
Week 5 Story: Misunderstood

This story is still between Rama and Ravana, but it is placed in a typical high school setting.

2/12/17
This story is about the meeting of Rama and Wonder Woman. After Rama defeats Ravana, there is a strange change in atmosphere that alters the setting and the story.


Thursday, March 23, 2017

Week 9 Storytelling: The Link

The Link

Kunti. Source

Kunti, the wife of Pandu, took charge of the palace and offered hospitality to visitors. One day, there was a sage named Durvasa that visited her and as always, Kunti offered her hospitality. Durvasa felt as if Kunti’s services were beyond his expectations and gave her a Mantra. The way that the Mantra worked was simple. Durvasa said, “Whichever god you think of while chanting this Mantra will appear in front of you in human form and practically be your slave. In the morning, the god will leave and place a son of himself in your womb.”

Kunti could feel that power of the Mantra within herself but for some reason she was skeptical. She tested the Mantra one day while thinking of the sun god, but she did not expect anything to actually happen. She was shocked when the sun god actually appeared. She said, “I did not want you to actually show up! I was just testing the Mantra given to me by sage Durvasa.” The sun god simply said that he could leave. Kunti refused and wanted the sun god to stay. By the morning, the sun god left Kunti with a child that had earrings and armor on. Kunti did not know what to do with the child, so she simply put him in a basket and sent him floating down the river. This child was the famous Karna.

The sun god appearing after Kunti's Mantra. Source

Throughout the next few weeks, Kunti did similar practices to get herself and her husband a family since they could not naturally have children. She had Yudhistir born by Yama, Arjuna born by Indra, Bheema born by Vayu, and finally Nakula and Shahadeva born by the Ashwins. The reason that two were born to the Ashwins was simply because they are divine twin horsemen and each brother left a child. This family ended up becoming the famous group of brothers known as the Pandavas.

She had promised to herself and her husband that she would no longer use the Mantra to bear children because it seemed completely unfair to others who could not have children on their own. After the passing of Pandu, Kunti had a random thought. “I have only ever called upon gods with the Mantra, but what if I called down a goddess,” she thought.

Thinking of who she should summon in front of her, or if she should even do it at all, her palace was robbed and she felt somewhat helpless herself. She decided to call upon the goddess, Durga. Durga is the warrior goddess that battles evil and demonic forces. She is a fearless goddess that carries weapons into battle while riding on a lion or tiger.

Kunti decided on Durga because if a child was born, she believed the child could help defend the palace. When Durga appeared, neither of the two really knew what would happen. In the morning, as usual, the goddess disappeared. Kunti could hear a baby crying but there was not a baby to be seen. The odd thing was that the baby crying was not a boy; it was a girl.

Durga, the warrior goddess. Source

Kunti fainted. While she was on the ground and slowly losing life, she had visions in her head that the baby was sent somewhere else. It appeared like a completely different time and place. There were skyscrapers and cars, something she did not recognize at all. At the end of her vision, and the end of her life, she saw a baby girl crying in a woven basket at the doorstep of a house in a metropolitan. This crying baby is known as Wonder Woman. 

Baby Wonder Woman. Source

Author’s Note:

This story is a prequel to my Week 3 Story: The Meeting.

The reason that I wanted to write this prequel was to give a reason that the Hindu stories are somehow linked to Wonder Woman. In the original story, The Meeting, Rama was transported through a portal into a metropolitan. He ultimately met Wonder Woman and fought enemies together. I did not feel that it really made too much sense with Rama just randomly being sent to Wonder Woman, so I wanted to create a link between the two settings.

This story is based off the story of Kunti and her Mantra. She was given the Mantra by the sage, Durvasa. Anytime that the Mantra was used, a human form of the god she was thinking about would appear in front of her. In the story, she always summoned males and that left her with a son. In this story, I had her call down Durga, who is a goddess. Since children are normally born between a male and a female there was something that went wrong with using this Mantra. A baby was born, but she was sent to a different dimension. In addition, the baby was a girl instead of a boy because Durga was a female. The baby that was sent to the different dimension was Wonder Woman and that is “The Link” between the two settings.

Pikapost. link to the website.
Mahabharata Online Films, link to the online videos

Tuesday, March 21, 2017

Reading Notes: Mahabharata Online Film, Part D

A Statue of Arjun. Source


Mahabharata Online Films, link to the online videos


  • Karna's participation was left out of the video ;(
  • The winner of the archer battle wins Draupadi
  • The king tried to compete in the challenge and Draupadi said that he will never be worthy of the hand of a princess
  • Arjun and Bheem went to Swayamwar
  • Pandavas were in disguise so Brahmin would not be attacked
  • Draupadi was destined to 5 men as explained by a sage
  • Return to Hastinapur
  • Krishna meets Arjun
  • Narad visits Indraprastha
  • Arjun was sent into exile
  • The Pandavas went into exile for 12 years after a gamble
  • Arjun was sentenced to 12 years of exile as well
  • Arjun left his wife behind on his exile and went on a "Journey"
  • Makes it seem like Arjun essentially ran away from his wife
  • Bheema was married to Hidimba
  • There was an encounter between Yaksha and that Pandavas
  • Arjun reached Dwarka
  • Arjun was destined to have many wives. 

Reading Notes: Mahabharata Online Film, Part C

Karna, a master archer. Source

Mahabharata Online Films, link to the online videos

  • Karna's body born in enchanted armor
  • The armor grew with Karna as he grew into a man
  • Karna seeked someone to teach him the art of war
  • Karna seemed to be destined to be an archer
  • Karna got stung by a scorpion's stinger
  • The teacher said that there is no way that Karna could have remained quiet after being stung and lost his trust
  • Karna appeared before the crowd and wanted to challenge others and prove that he was more skilled in the art of war
  • "Karna would have to be royal blood to battle"
  • Karna was declared king so that he could challenge the Pandavas
  • Drona was invited to train the Pandavas in archery
  • People praised the Pandavas after they saw the strength of them
  • A large festival was said to happen in honor of Shiva to lure the Pandavas
  • There was a plot to set the palace on fire once the Pandavas fell asleep to kill them
  • This was planned to make it look like an accident, the walls were constructed of flammable materials 
  • The Pandavas were able to get away from the plot and took refuge in the forest
  • Bhima kills Bakasura
  • Draupadi was born and was said to be the cause of destruction

Tuesday, March 7, 2017

Week 8 Growth Mindset

Growing Plants. Source


As I mentioned in my week 1 growth mindset post, I always strive to grow and improve myself. One thing that I have always had some issues with are writing. This class has definitely helped my improve on this skill and I believe that it will continually keep improving. Dr. Gibbs does a great job at getting feedback back to us about the stories and helping us find both spelling and grammar errors. This type of criticism is very rewarding because it seems that there is always a way for me to improve my writing and storytelling. I also really like that this class is open and really lets the students in the class decide what they want to learn about and write about. I think that the feedback provided by both Dr. Gibbs and the other students in the class will continuously help me improve and carry throughout the second half of the semester.

Monday, March 6, 2017

Ryan McElyea's - Week 8 Reflections

Reflection. Source

READING:

  • I think that I have been making good selections in the readings that I have chosen. My favorite was the Ramayana PDE. I feel like it was super easy to understand and comprehend throughout. However, I have enjoyed the YouTube videos of the Mahabharata as well. I usually do my readings either before bed or when I wake up in the morning.
  • I feel like my reading notes last week are definitely what helps me the most. I like to represent the main ideas of each section of reading to help me demonstrate high points in my own writing tasks.
  • I am definitely looking forward to continuing the videos of Mahabharata. The Hero and British tales in weeks 11-12 are something that also sparked my interests.
WRITING:
  • The only story that I am super happy about this whole semester was the one from Week 3 that had Rama and Wonder Woman. Because of that, I plan on writing the rest of my stories with this theme and topic. I have learned that it is difficult for me to stay in one tense (past, present, or future). Being an engineering student, I do not really have much courses that deal with writing a lot. When I have trouble with writing, I usually just good and try to find the correct way to structure something.
  • I am doing the portfolio and like the choice that I made. So far I only have 2 stories in it but will hopefully hace five or six by the end of the semester.
  • Looking ahead I am basically going to do a continuation on the Wonder Woman stories that I wrote about in Week 3. I plan on introducing new characters and ideas that are hopefully related to the readings.

CONNECTING:
  • When I look at other people's story I love how majority of them use a lot of dialogue. Dialogue is one of the things that I struggle the most with so I would love to be able to incorporate it more in my own stories.

Tuesday, February 28, 2017

Reading Notes: Mahabharata Online Film, Part B

The Pandavas. Source


Mahabharata Online Films, link to the online videos


  • Wife blindfolded herself to share her husband's condition
  • The sage gave her a mantra to summon any god that she chooses
  • She tested the gift and called the sun god and she was in shocked once it actually worked and summoned him
  • Gave a child with golden earrings and armored as well
  • However, she was unmarried and knew that she could not keep the child
  • She placed the child in a basket and took him to the river
  • She placed the basket on the waves of the river and watched it float away
  • Pandu and two others decided to spend some quiet time in the forest
  • The tribes in the forest taught the group how to be gods
  • Pandu made a mistake and shot a hermit coupled making love
  • The hermit cursed Pandu
  • The minute that Pandu makes love with a woman, he will die
  • Kunti helps Pandu get a son by using her mantra
  • Kunti refused to use the mantra to get sons
  • Pandu got 5 sons from Kunti
  • Pandu forced himself on a woman and it caused him to die due to the curse
  • Bheem receives the strength of 1000 elephants
  • Drona trains the Pandavas
  • The Pandavas learn the ways of the war and use of weapons
  • Drona noticed each of his student's gifts
  • Charioteer, swordsman, strength (mace weapon), could wield all weapons equally but was the best with archery
  • Someone shut a dog up with arrows
  • The dog was not hurt but the mouth was sealed shut using perfectly shot arrows
  • The mysterious archer said he was taught by Drona
  • Drona refused the mysterious forester as a student

Reading Notes: Mahabharata Online Film, Part A

Bhishma. Source


Mahabharata Online Films, link to the online videos


  • Story can be said to start at many points
  • Account of how karma functions - cause and effect
  • Drowned their first child
  • The king did not ask his wife any questions
  • The queen killed their next 6 children
  • The king could not hold silence anymore when she was about to kill the 8th child
  • The skilled archer at the river was the kings son (16 years later)
  • It was clear that the king was upset after the fisherman's daughter rejected his offer in marriage
  • The prince (king's son) met with the fisherman to try to convince him to let his daughter marry his father, even offering to give up the throne when it would be time so her children can reign
  • His son will be able to choose the time of his death
  • Bhishma kept his promise of watching the throne
  • Bhishma acted as a father to his two half-brothers
  • Bhishma worried if something happened to his brother, there would be no one to claim the throne
  • Bhishma starts the cycle of his death
  • Terrible illness killed the king, no one to take the throne
  • Bhishma refuses to father the children
  • Child would be born pale and with poor health
  • Need to create alliances with other powerful kingdoms
  • Sister blindfolded herself for life

Week 5 Storytelling: Misunderstood


Working on a new discovery. Source.

Misunderstood

Rama and his group of friends were walking through the courtyard at their private high school. This group of friends were the popular students at the school that everyone wanted to be a part of or hang out with. The group of friends were about thirty minutes late to class and it did not seem that the teachers or anyone cared because of their status. This was probably because Rama was part of an elite family in the area.

The next day a student named Ravana was running late to class as well. It was a rainy day, so he was completely soaked and splashed by cars speeding through the puddles on his daily walk to the campus. He walked into the same class that Rama was late in previously by a few minutes and the teachers sent him to the principal’s office. The principal gave Ravana a detention for being late. Ravana was the kid that no one liked in this school. It is not that he was a bully or anything. Ravana just seemed different and did not fit in with the other students or the staff.

The popular girl in the school was named Sita. Of course, Sita and Rama were a couple and everyone was jealous of this power couple. Sita was an incredibly beautiful girl and Ravana wanted to be with her more than anything. This made Ravana envy Rama even more.

Every year, this high school has something similar to a science fair where groups compete against each other with invention ideas and it is called the Invention Fair. Rama and his group were on the same team as usual. However, since Ravana did not have any friends he was in a group by himself. Ravana was extremely clever and focused a lot of his time on schoolwork since he never is invited to parties, events, or anything. Ravana decided that this time he was going to come out on top of Rama.

This event lasted for the last two months of the school year and students were allowed to work on the project during class time. Ravana spent at least six hours a day doing research and working on prototypes for his project. Rama was often out hanging with friends and did not really put much effort in, but of course he would have something to turn in during the competition.

Rama ended up paying a small firm to make a prototype of his invention since money was not a problem for him. Rama’s invention, however, was not a very good idea and was actually something that already exists. Rama "invented" a phone case that can be placed on a cell phone and charge it. Ravana had a great idea but he did not have the money to produce it. Ravana made a device that was similar to a breathalyzer where a patient can breath into it. The device then printed out data to find traces of cancer. At the fair, a lot of people liked the fabrication of Rama’s project but they did admit that this item already exists. When they viewed Ravana’s project, it was a great idea that a lot of businessmen were actually extremely interested in.

Ravana was able to start a company based off of his idea and became a well-liked individual in the industry. Even though Ravana had an extremely difficult time in high school, his work ended up paying off and he became successful.

Author's Note:
I wanted to write a story based on the characters Rama and Ravana. I changed the setting to be taking place in a high school environment where Ravana was the nerdy kid and somewhat misunderstood. Even though high school was not a great place for him, he persevered through and became successful.
The person who wins is said to always be the one that tells their version of the story. For example, “only the victors write the history textbooks” and this could somewhat be applied the Ramayana. Since Rama was ultimately the victor, maybe the audience only knows his side of the story and not Ravana’s. If Ravana won, then maybe the audience would tend to agree with Ravana’s point of view because it would be more aimed towards his motives. I am not saying that it is the case for the Ramayana but it is something to think about. In the story I wrote, Rama looked like the cool kid that had everything going to him while Ravana was the nerd that no one really wanted to be around and I feel like this can be seen parallel to the actual story. Even though in this story it was not about Ravana defeating Rama by killing him, it was Ravana defeating Rama by working hard on the project.

Public Domain Ramayana, link to the reading online.

Thursday, February 23, 2017

Week 6: Story Planning: Continuation of Wonder Woman and Rama Series

Wonder Woman. Source

For the story next week, I am planning to continue my Wonder Woman mix with the Hindu gods. I am unsure if I will be introducing any new characters from the Mahabharata just yet. I really enjoyed writing about the clash of the two universes. The last story focused in on the first time that there was a meeting between the Hindu characters, Rama and Hanuman, and Wonder Woman in the metropolitan scene.

For the next story, I want to do either a prequel or a sequel. If I do a prequel, I was thinking that I want to focus in on Wonder Woman and maybe somehow link her to the Hindu gods and that is why the portal appeared near Rama and brought them near her. It would be interesting to almost do a Superman style where he was born on another planet and brought to earth for safety. However, in this story, Wonder Woman would have maybe been born in the Rama era and teleported somehow to this new dimension in the modern-day metropolitan that she currently lives in. Somehow, she might be linked to a Hindu god and that is why she has some of the abilities that she does.

If I do a sequel, I might jump into another action scene with Rama and Hanuman fighting against modern weapons and villains with Wonder Woman. If I do choose to do the sequel first, I want to implement some kind of interaction that would trigger the next story I write to flash back to a prequel similar to what is mentioned above. I like being able to use the comic book pictures that are out there between Wonder Woman and Rama and revolving my story around them.


Therefore, whatever direction I decide to go, prequel or sequel, I think that I will continue on my Week 3 story with Wonder Woman and Rama.

Public Domain Ramayana, link to the reading online.
Pikapost. link to the website.

Wednesday, February 22, 2017

Reading Notes: Public Domain Mahabharata, Part D

Vyasa summons the ghosts at the Ganges River. Source.


Public Domain Mahabharata, link to the reading online.


  • Amba had a vow to seek revenge, bring about Bhishma's death in her next life
  • After, Bhishma's fall, Drona takes command of Duryodhana's armies and vows to make Yudhishthira his prisoner
  • Arjuna voews to defend his brother no matter what
  • Arjuna loses his son, Abhimanyu
  • Bhima loses his rakshasa son, the mighty warrior, Ghatotkacha
  • Bhima will secure his revenge for Duhshana's treatment of Draupadi
  • Karna died
  • Duryodhana is alive and uses his supernatural powers to take refuge beneath the waters of a lake
  • Bhishma has the gift of choosing the moment of his own death
  • Bhishma is wasting for the solstices and before he dies he will instruct the survivors of the battle on how to rule the world that has survived
  • Vyasa will conjure up the ghosts of the dead warriors (photo above)
  • A hunter mistook Krishna for an animal and shot on arrow at Krishna that killed him
  • After Krishna dies, the Pandavas and Drauapdi decide to end their time on earth

Tuesday, February 21, 2017

Reading Notes: Public Domain Mahabharata, Part C

Cattle Raid. Source.


Public Domain Mahabharata, link to the reading online.


  • The Pandavas are in a long period of exile in the forest similar to Rama
  • Krishna pays a visit to the Pandavas in exile
  • Ajuna went out on his own when he violated Draupadi's private time with Yudhishthira
  • Arjuna is the god Indra
  • Indra is Arjuna's father
  • Arjuna goes to Swarga, Indra's heavenly house, where he meets Urvashi
  • Hanuman, from the Ravana, is in this story too
  • Bhimna, Hanuman's half-brother, encounters Hanuman
  • Hanuman and Bhimna are sons of Vayu, the wind god
  • When Karna was bord, his body was clad in golden armor and he had earrings that were a token of invincibility
  • Draupadi faces terrible danger in the forest, similar to Sita
  • The final year of Pandavas' exile must be spent in hiding
  • Bhima defense Draupadi but she will claim that the deed was done by her husband who is an immortal gandharva
  • Duryodhana and his allies attack King Virata and steal his cattle
  • The Pandavas come to King Virata's defense
  • Pandavas' exile is finally over
  • Krishna tries to avoid war and make peace between the factions
  • Krishna reveals to Karna the secret of his birth and tells him to go to the Pandavas in peace, assuring him that they will not only accept him but regard him as their elder brother
  • The Bhagavad-Gita, "Lord's Song," is the most famous part of the Mahabharata
  • Bhishma is the general of the Kaurava forces but does not feel the same loyalty to Duryodhana that Karna does

Wednesday, February 15, 2017

Reading Notes: Public Domain Mahabharata, Part B

Image of Krishna. Source. (beautiful art for Mahabharata scenes)


Public Domain Mahabharata, link to the reading online.


  • Pandava brothers lived in the wilderness
  • The Pandava brothers will face many dangers while they living in hiding
  • Love affair between Bhima and rakshasi
  • Bhima defeated the rakshasa Hidimba
  • Bhima has to battle an asura known as Baka
  • The Pandavas are disguised as brahmins
  • It is not uncommon for kings to have many wives in the epics
  • However, Draupadi has five husbands (the Pandavas) and that is something that no one would expect
  • Yudhishthira becomes a king
  • Arjuna breaks a rule and must leave for a period of exile
  • Arjuna and Chitra marry and have a son
  • Their son stays in Manipur and goes on to become king
  • Arjuna and Krishna have a special connection
  • Arjuna however marrys her sister, Subhadra
  • Yudhishthira declares himself as a supreme monarch by performing a Rajasuya sacrifice
  • Bhima swears terrible oaths during the gambling scene that will drive the rest

Monday, February 13, 2017

Reading Notes: Public Domain Mahabharata, Part A

Mahabharata. Source.

Public Domain Mahabharata, link to the reading online.


  • Devavrata is the son of King Shantanu and the goddess Ganga
  • Davavrata is a human but has the powers of the eight gods, Vasus
  • How can he have a human and divine identity?
  • Satyavati is Vyasa's mother
  • Bhishma seizes the three daughers of the king of Kashi to be brides for his sons Shantanu and Satyavati
  • Only two of the women can be brides
  • Amba has a story of her own
  • Amba becomes a part of Bhishma's life
  • Kunti will be King Pandu's wife
  • This story parallels a lot of stuff from Ramayana
  • Pandu gets cursed by a sage that he killed when he was shaped like a deer
  • Kunti raises the five sons of Pandu by herself
  • Kunti brings the 5 boys to Pandu's royal city
  • The blind king, Dhritarashtra, gives the fives sons a home
  • Duryodhana tries to kill Bhima
  • Bhima goes down into the underworld king of the mighty serpents called nagas, which causes Bhima to become supernaturally strong
  • Drona will be the guru to the Pandavas and the Kauravas
  • When the Pandavas and Kauravas are trained as warriors, the will participate in a tournament
  • Arjuna appears to be the winner of the contest but then Karna appears
  • Karna is the son of Kunti and the sun god
  • Arjuna and Karna do not realize that they are brothers

Sunday, February 12, 2017

Feedback Focus - Ryan McElyea

Focus on your tasks. Source.

For the reading out loud technique I read "Why Dog and Cat are Enemies" out loud to my dog. I feel like it was interesting to spend more time focusing in on the story and hearing the story as I spoke it out loud. I really liked this story too! I felt bad for the poor dog! :(

For the copy-and-delete technique I read "What Makes the Lightning." This technique did not really work that well for me and I did not like having to go back and delete the previous paragraphs upon completion. The little notes helped but I did not see the benefit of deleting the previous paragraph.

For the time technique I read "Midterm Madness." Personally I did not like this technique much. I was fine focusing on the entire story from start to finish but when I went back to try to write notes, that is where I found myself kind of lost.

If I had to rank them in order I would do:
1. Reading out loud
2. Copy-and-delete
3. Timer

Thursday, February 9, 2017

Week 4 Story Planning: The Divine Archer

An example of a "group" at work. LinkedIn

For this story I was thinking of using the two sides (Rama and Ravana) and put them both in a modern setting like at a university or working in industry. Maybe Rama is working on one product and Ravana is working on another and they are competing to impress the girl (Sita). For the story planning this week, I essentially took my reading notes and kept the relevant notes and discuss how they can be transformed to fit the story. The ideas are in parenthesis. This story might completely change but it is what I thought could be a possible approach.
  • There were four sons that were born: Rama, Lakshmana, Bharata, and Shatrughna (Maybe say Rama's 3 brothers are his friends instead of brothers)
  • Rama is the god Vishnu in human form (Rama is the cool kid)
  • Sita and Rama fall in love (Sita likes Rama because he is the cool kid)
  • Sita is also a goddess that is in human form (Sita is just some pretty girl)
  • Agastya gives Rama weapons that will help him in later battles (Rama gets to work on the interesting project or something)
  • Ravana has 10 heads and 20 arms (Ravana can be the weird kid)
  • Vibhisnaha is Ravana's brother however he is on Rama's side (Vibhisnaha wants to be on Rama's side since Ravana is the weirdo)
  • Sita refuses Ravana constantly (Sita thinks she is too cool to talk to Ravana)
  • Ravana sentences Hanuman to death (Ravana makes one of the cool kids with Rama disappear)
  • The fire ends up setting Lanka on fire (Indicates the start of a competition or something)
  • Kumbhakarna, Ravana's GIANT brother, wants Ravana to give Sita back to Rama
  • Both sides get ready to fight (Maybe the two groups on working on different projects or capstone topics and Ravana tries to sabotage Rama)
  • Rama shoots off Ravana's crown when he arrives (Rama is being a jerk to Ravana)
  • The battle lasts all day
  • Rama slays Ravana (I'm not sure if I want Ravana or Rama to be victorious)

The Divine Archer by F. J. Gould. link to website.

Wednesday, February 8, 2017

Reading Notes: The Divine Archer, Part B

A girl with a bow. Source


The Divine Archer by F. J. Gould. link to website.


  • (Part B is much shorter than Part A)
  • Rama kills Vali with an arrow
  • Rama gives Hanuman his ring as a token for Sita
  • Hanuman goes to Lanka
  • Vibhisnaha is Ravana's brother however he is on Rama's side
  • Vibhisnaha tells Hanuman where Ravana is keeping Sita
  • Ravana is keeping Sita at the ashoka grove
  • Sita refuses Ravana constantly
  • Hanuman finally speaks to Sita and gives her Rama's ring
  • Haunman is then taking to Ravana's court
  • Ravana sentences Hanuman to death
  • Vibhishana does not let Ravana put him to death
  • Ravana sets Hanuman's tail on fire instead
  • The fire ends up setting Lanka on fire
  • Sita gives Hanuman a jewel to give to Rama
  • Queen Mandodari wants Ravana to have peace with Rama
  • Kumbhakarna, Ravana's GIANT brother, wants Ravana to give Sita back to Rama
  • Both sides get ready to fight
  • Rama and his army build a bridge to Lanka 
  • Rama shoots off Ravana's crown when he arrives
  • The battle lasts all day
  • Lakshmana is wounded by Indrajit
  • Hanuman goes and gets herbs to heal him
  • Rama kills Kumbharkana
  • Indra sends Rama his chariot and weapons
  • Rama slays Ravana
  • Vibhisana becomes king of Lanka
  • Rama sends Sita into exile
  • Sita comes back and takes her spot on the throne

Tuesday, February 7, 2017

Reading Notes: The Divine Archer, Part A

A Divine Archer. Source.


The Divine Archer by F. J. Gould. link to website.


  • This story begins essentially where King Dasaratha wanted a son to pass on his heir
  • There were four sons that were born: Rama, Lakshmana, Bharata, and Shatrughna
  • Rama is the god Vishnu in human form
  • Vishnu was sent to defeat Ravana.
  • Ravana cannot be killed by gods so he needed to be in human form
  • Sita and Rama fall in love
  • Sita is also a goddess that is in human form
  • Rama had to be able to bend the bow of Shiva with his hands to be able to claim Sita
  • Parashurama appears and wants to know who bent the bow of Shiva
  • Parashurama then gives Rama the bow of Vishnu (which is himself?)
  • Rama has no trouble stringing Vishnu's bow
  • Three of King Dasaratha's sons get married on the same day (not Rama)
  • King Dasartha wanted Rama to become the next king
  • Bharata ultimately is chosen to be the King once Dasartha dies
  • King Dasaratha dies and Bharata becomes king
  • Rama puts his sandals on the King's throne until his exile is over
  • Agastya gives Rama weapons that will help him in later battles
  • Ravana has 10 heads and 20 arms
  • Maricha appears as a golden deer to lure Rama and Sita
  • Sita wants Rama to catch the deer
  • Jatayu battles Ravana
  • Ravana cuts off Jatayu's wings
  • Sugriva wants to help Rama
  • Sugriva is the leader of the monkeys (Vanaras)

Thursday, February 2, 2017

Week 3 Storytelling: The Meeting

The Meeting

Rama after defeating Ravana. Source

Rama defeated Ravana at the Battle of Lanka. This was a celebratory moment for everyone, even the gods that sent him. While Rama and his army were returning to the kingdom, there was a strange feeling in the air. The air started to feel heavy and the sky turned dark. The storm appeared to be a hurricane in the sky. Rama and Hanuman felt a strong wing all of a sudden. However, this was not a wind but actually a gravitational pull coming from the storm in the sky. The gravitational pull picked Rama and Hanuman off the ground and into the eye of the storm. The storm opened into a portal and the two disappeared into the dreary night sky.

A storm appears that transforms into a portal. Source

Time and space warped around them and when they landed back on the ground, they noticed that it was a completely different setting. The two had traveled through space and to a modern-day metropolitan area. There was a crowd of people around them dressed in suits and carrying briefcases. The hero of the city, Wonder Woman, approached them to question who they are and what they are doing. Rama and Hanuman were not sure what they were doing there because everything happened so sudden. Due to their hesitation and farfetched story, Wonder Woman believed that the two were lying and were actually there to cause trouble. She placed the two in a cell in the county jailhouse. 

A few hours passed by before people from Rama’s era started falling from the sky as well. However, these people falling from the sky were enemies of Rama and instantly started causing terror in the metropolis. This was an extension of Ravana’s army but strangely, it was led by Sita. Due to Ravana’s death, there was a curse put on Sita that finally turned her against Rama, which is what Ravana was constantly trying to do. The curse was placed on Rama by Mandodari, Ravana's widow, to ensure despair on Rama since she now lost her loved one. Wonder Woman knew that somehow this army was related to the two people that she threw in the county jail hours ago. She went to Rama and asked who these people were and what they wanted. He convinced her that he was on the good side and needed her help to get rid of them.

Rama meeting Wonder Woman. Source

Rama was telling Wonder Woman how the leader of the people attacking was his wife but it appeared that she was under some type of curse to seek and kill him. Wonder Woman, Rama, and Hanuman went back to Wonder Woman’s office to get supplies. One of the weapons that Wonder Woman gave to Rama was the Bow of Vayu, which Rama believed was just some type of fancy bow. When they returned outside, it was the three of them versus the army in front of them. Wonder Woman was able to use her trusty lasso for attacking multiple targets, while using her gauntlets and shield to protect from sword and archer attacks. Hanuman was a master with hand-to-hand combat and able to take on a crowd of enemies at once. Rama and Sita were left alone to a one versus one battle. Rama was hesitant at first because this was the love of his life. However, due to the curse, Sita had no remembrance of their love. She used her strength and threw him into a nearby building within the blink of an eye. This is when Rama was trying to verbally reason with her and she once again pummeled him with her outstanding strength. Rama finally gave in and started to fight back. He noticed that anything that he tried would have zero effect on Sita. The curse was somehow making her invincible. Rama pulled out the Bow of Vayu but when he went to reach for an arrow, there were none left in his quiver. Sita forced Rama into the ground. He realized at this moment that the Sita he loved was no longer there and that he must destroy this being. Sita pulled her fist back and was about to swing it into Rama, which most likely would have killed him, when suddenly Wonder Woman lassoed Sita’s feet and swung her on the floor. Due to the emptiness that Rama felt, a glowing arrow appeared in the quiver. The Bow of Vayu was the exact opposite of Cupid’s bow. The fact that he knew that he could not love Sita anymore made the arrow appear. He loaded the arrow in the Bow of Vayu and fired it at Sita. It hit her right in the stomach and she instantly turned into dust. The battle was now over but it left the entire city devastated.     

Rama deals the final blow, saving earth with Wonder Woman and Hanuman. Source



Author's Note:
When I was doing research on Rama, I found a page where DC Comics used Hindu gods in some of their comic issues. The source had a few comic scenes from the issues so I took those and wrote a story around them. Because Ravana was always trying to convince Sita to get rid of Rama in the Ramayana, I wanted to incorporate where after Ravana died, it caused Sita to turn against Rama. Who knows, maybe Rama and Wonder Woman will fall in love! I like adding the twist that Rama and Sita aren’t together because throughout the epic, it seems that they are destined to be together.


I really like this style of writing or reading something like this in stories because it is a mix between two cultures. The story, Ramayana, is an old, traditional epic from India. Wonder woman is a character from the 20th century in America and the style between the two is different yet related. Both of them seem to have some sort of relation with supernatural elements. I feel like DC comics had the similar thought when they first started to introduce the Hindu gods into their comics. They produced with stories with multiple Hindu gods with one of the other well-known ones being Kali.

Public Domain Ramayana, link to the reading online.
Pikapost. link to the website.