Wednesday, March 29, 2017

Week 10 Story Planning: Wonder Woman Hindi Sequel

Wonder Woman. Source

I am planning to continue my story between Rama and Wonder Woman for my Week 11 story. My first story had a portal that brought Rama into Wonder Woman’s world and my last story was a prequel that explained why Wonder Woman was connected to the Indian epics. For this story, I want to make it where Wonder Woman starts to maybe find out some of her roots and connections. She was sent to this dimension by herself when she was born so technically she is completely unaware of the whole thing. Her mother is Kunti and the goddess Durga. In my prequel, I had it where Kunti died but I do not want that to be the case and will go back and rewrite that for my project revisions this week. I am thinking about somehow sending Durga to find Wonder Woman and try to get some of the story between the two straightened out. I want to have a fight scene or battle that involves Durga and Wonder Woman against some enemies but I am not really sure who that enemy is going to be yet. I will probably have one more story following this story so I am planning to add some kind of cliffhanger as well to lead into the final story that I write.

Ideas:
  • Durga and Wonder Woman fighting some evil forces
  • Wonder Woman learning about her past after her and Durga battle together
  • Wonder Woman will be of some type of importance to the Indian Epics due to her connection with Durga
  • The Indian characters may want her to return with them to the dimension
  • I want Wonder Woman to stay in her dimension so that maybe in the next story she can be sent into the dimension with Durga and she will be the one to have her cultural shock
  • Maybe add a love story for Wonder Woman and Rama from the first story that I wrote?


Pikapost. link to the website.
Mahabharata Online Films, link to the online videos

Tuesday, March 28, 2017

Reading Notes: Mahabharata Online Film, Part F

Bheem and Hanuman. Source


Mahabharata Online Films, link to the online videos


  • Draupadi gets disrobed
  • Draupadi had an oath to only tie her hair once she washed it with the blood and combed it with the bones of her enemies
  • Pandavas get sent into exile
  • (Pandavas do not seem very smart, in my opinion)
  • Seems like the Pandavas do not really ever learn their lesson
  • The exile for the Pandavas begins
  • Krishna could not help the Pandavas when they needed him
  • Krishna met with the Pandavas
  • (Krishna seems to never really let anything bother him)
  • The Pandavas needed to get support from the gods to fight the war
  • Arjun entered heaven in a human form
  • Arjun was able to enter heaven in this human form because Krishna used him as a tool to re-establish dharma
  • Arjun received Shiva's weapon when he was brought up to Indralok
  • Arjun was blessed and received proper training for the upcoming battle
  • Arjun was cursed by Urvashi while he was staying at Indralok
  • Bheem encounters Hanuman

Monday, March 27, 2017

Reading Notes: Mahabharata Online Film, Part E

Draupadi. Source


Mahabharata Online Films, link to the online videos


  • Subhadra wins over Draupadi
  • Abhimanya was born
  • Abhimanya is the nephew of Lord Krishna
  • Abhimanya married Uttara, the princess of Matsya Kingdom
  • Abhimanya was the reincarnation of the moon-god, Chandra
  •  Abhimanya was trained by Krishna
  • Pradyumna was Krishna and Rukmini's son
  • Jarasandha was slain
  • Krishna seemed impatient with the punishment of Shishupal
  • Yudhishthir becomes king
  • (Could not really concentrate on episode 40 with all of the background noise)
  • "Duryodhan's Humiliation"
  • Shakuni was Prince of Gandhar
  • Shakuni appears middle-eastern
  • Yudhishthir and the Kauravas gamble (Ludo).
  • Kauravas were losing the first rounds while Yudhishthir was winning the first ones
  • Yudhishthir got overconfident with winning and eventually it did not turn out well
  • Yudhishthir gambled his brothers and wife and ended up losing them
  • Draupadi was at stake (used her as image for these reading notes)

Sunday, March 26, 2017

Ryan McElyea's Portfolio

3/23/17
Week 9 Story: The Link
This story is the prequel to The Meeting. It explains "The Link" between Wonder Woman and the Indian Epics.

2/27/17
Week 5 Story: Misunderstood

This story is still between Rama and Ravana, but it is placed in a typical high school setting.

2/12/17
This story is about the meeting of Rama and Wonder Woman. After Rama defeats Ravana, there is a strange change in atmosphere that alters the setting and the story.


Thursday, March 23, 2017

Week 9 Storytelling: The Link

The Link

Kunti. Source

Kunti, the wife of Pandu, took charge of the palace and offered hospitality to visitors. One day, there was a sage named Durvasa that visited her and as always, Kunti offered her hospitality. Durvasa felt as if Kunti’s services were beyond his expectations and gave her a Mantra. The way that the Mantra worked was simple. Durvasa said, “Whichever god you think of while chanting this Mantra will appear in front of you in human form and practically be your slave. In the morning, the god will leave and place a son of himself in your womb.”

Kunti could feel that power of the Mantra within herself but for some reason she was skeptical. She tested the Mantra one day while thinking of the sun god, but she did not expect anything to actually happen. She was shocked when the sun god actually appeared. She said, “I did not want you to actually show up! I was just testing the Mantra given to me by sage Durvasa.” The sun god simply said that he could leave. Kunti refused and wanted the sun god to stay. By the morning, the sun god left Kunti with a child that had earrings and armor on. Kunti did not know what to do with the child, so she simply put him in a basket and sent him floating down the river. This child was the famous Karna.

The sun god appearing after Kunti's Mantra. Source

Throughout the next few weeks, Kunti did similar practices to get herself and her husband a family since they could not naturally have children. She had Yudhistir born by Yama, Arjuna born by Indra, Bheema born by Vayu, and finally Nakula and Shahadeva born by the Ashwins. The reason that two were born to the Ashwins was simply because they are divine twin horsemen and each brother left a child. This family ended up becoming the famous group of brothers known as the Pandavas.

She had promised to herself and her husband that she would no longer use the Mantra to bear children because it seemed completely unfair to others who could not have children on their own. After the passing of Pandu, Kunti had a random thought. “I have only ever called upon gods with the Mantra, but what if I called down a goddess,” she thought.

Thinking of who she should summon in front of her, or if she should even do it at all, her palace was robbed and she felt somewhat helpless herself. She decided to call upon the goddess, Durga. Durga is the warrior goddess that battles evil and demonic forces. She is a fearless goddess that carries weapons into battle while riding on a lion or tiger.

Kunti decided on Durga because if a child was born, she believed the child could help defend the palace. When Durga appeared, neither of the two really knew what would happen. In the morning, as usual, the goddess disappeared. Kunti could hear a baby crying but there was not a baby to be seen. The odd thing was that the baby crying was not a boy; it was a girl.

Durga, the warrior goddess. Source

Kunti fainted. While she was on the ground and slowly losing life, she had visions in her head that the baby was sent somewhere else. It appeared like a completely different time and place. There were skyscrapers and cars, something she did not recognize at all. At the end of her vision, and the end of her life, she saw a baby girl crying in a woven basket at the doorstep of a house in a metropolitan. This crying baby is known as Wonder Woman. 

Baby Wonder Woman. Source

Author’s Note:

This story is a prequel to my Week 3 Story: The Meeting.

The reason that I wanted to write this prequel was to give a reason that the Hindu stories are somehow linked to Wonder Woman. In the original story, The Meeting, Rama was transported through a portal into a metropolitan. He ultimately met Wonder Woman and fought enemies together. I did not feel that it really made too much sense with Rama just randomly being sent to Wonder Woman, so I wanted to create a link between the two settings.

This story is based off the story of Kunti and her Mantra. She was given the Mantra by the sage, Durvasa. Anytime that the Mantra was used, a human form of the god she was thinking about would appear in front of her. In the story, she always summoned males and that left her with a son. In this story, I had her call down Durga, who is a goddess. Since children are normally born between a male and a female there was something that went wrong with using this Mantra. A baby was born, but she was sent to a different dimension. In addition, the baby was a girl instead of a boy because Durga was a female. The baby that was sent to the different dimension was Wonder Woman and that is “The Link” between the two settings.

Pikapost. link to the website.
Mahabharata Online Films, link to the online videos

Tuesday, March 21, 2017

Reading Notes: Mahabharata Online Film, Part D

A Statue of Arjun. Source


Mahabharata Online Films, link to the online videos


  • Karna's participation was left out of the video ;(
  • The winner of the archer battle wins Draupadi
  • The king tried to compete in the challenge and Draupadi said that he will never be worthy of the hand of a princess
  • Arjun and Bheem went to Swayamwar
  • Pandavas were in disguise so Brahmin would not be attacked
  • Draupadi was destined to 5 men as explained by a sage
  • Return to Hastinapur
  • Krishna meets Arjun
  • Narad visits Indraprastha
  • Arjun was sent into exile
  • The Pandavas went into exile for 12 years after a gamble
  • Arjun was sentenced to 12 years of exile as well
  • Arjun left his wife behind on his exile and went on a "Journey"
  • Makes it seem like Arjun essentially ran away from his wife
  • Bheema was married to Hidimba
  • There was an encounter between Yaksha and that Pandavas
  • Arjun reached Dwarka
  • Arjun was destined to have many wives. 

Reading Notes: Mahabharata Online Film, Part C

Karna, a master archer. Source

Mahabharata Online Films, link to the online videos

  • Karna's body born in enchanted armor
  • The armor grew with Karna as he grew into a man
  • Karna seeked someone to teach him the art of war
  • Karna seemed to be destined to be an archer
  • Karna got stung by a scorpion's stinger
  • The teacher said that there is no way that Karna could have remained quiet after being stung and lost his trust
  • Karna appeared before the crowd and wanted to challenge others and prove that he was more skilled in the art of war
  • "Karna would have to be royal blood to battle"
  • Karna was declared king so that he could challenge the Pandavas
  • Drona was invited to train the Pandavas in archery
  • People praised the Pandavas after they saw the strength of them
  • A large festival was said to happen in honor of Shiva to lure the Pandavas
  • There was a plot to set the palace on fire once the Pandavas fell asleep to kill them
  • This was planned to make it look like an accident, the walls were constructed of flammable materials 
  • The Pandavas were able to get away from the plot and took refuge in the forest
  • Bhima kills Bakasura
  • Draupadi was born and was said to be the cause of destruction

Tuesday, March 7, 2017

Week 8 Growth Mindset

Growing Plants. Source


As I mentioned in my week 1 growth mindset post, I always strive to grow and improve myself. One thing that I have always had some issues with are writing. This class has definitely helped my improve on this skill and I believe that it will continually keep improving. Dr. Gibbs does a great job at getting feedback back to us about the stories and helping us find both spelling and grammar errors. This type of criticism is very rewarding because it seems that there is always a way for me to improve my writing and storytelling. I also really like that this class is open and really lets the students in the class decide what they want to learn about and write about. I think that the feedback provided by both Dr. Gibbs and the other students in the class will continuously help me improve and carry throughout the second half of the semester.

Monday, March 6, 2017

Ryan McElyea's - Week 8 Reflections

Reflection. Source

READING:

  • I think that I have been making good selections in the readings that I have chosen. My favorite was the Ramayana PDE. I feel like it was super easy to understand and comprehend throughout. However, I have enjoyed the YouTube videos of the Mahabharata as well. I usually do my readings either before bed or when I wake up in the morning.
  • I feel like my reading notes last week are definitely what helps me the most. I like to represent the main ideas of each section of reading to help me demonstrate high points in my own writing tasks.
  • I am definitely looking forward to continuing the videos of Mahabharata. The Hero and British tales in weeks 11-12 are something that also sparked my interests.
WRITING:
  • The only story that I am super happy about this whole semester was the one from Week 3 that had Rama and Wonder Woman. Because of that, I plan on writing the rest of my stories with this theme and topic. I have learned that it is difficult for me to stay in one tense (past, present, or future). Being an engineering student, I do not really have much courses that deal with writing a lot. When I have trouble with writing, I usually just good and try to find the correct way to structure something.
  • I am doing the portfolio and like the choice that I made. So far I only have 2 stories in it but will hopefully hace five or six by the end of the semester.
  • Looking ahead I am basically going to do a continuation on the Wonder Woman stories that I wrote about in Week 3. I plan on introducing new characters and ideas that are hopefully related to the readings.

CONNECTING:
  • When I look at other people's story I love how majority of them use a lot of dialogue. Dialogue is one of the things that I struggle the most with so I would love to be able to incorporate it more in my own stories.